How much continuity does the video have? Are there any places where the continuity can be improved? How?
• To what extent is the video readable as a film opening? Can you understand that it's an opening? Why or why not? What can you do to make it more readable?
• To what extent is the video readable within your chosen genre? Can you tell it's a horror/thriller/comedy/coming-of-age etc.? How can this area be improved?
• Partner with someone who doesn't know anything about your video. Record their answers to the following questions:
◦ What is setting (time and place)? How can you tell?
◦ Who are the characters? How can you tell?
◦ What is the movie going to be about? How can you tell?
◦ To what extent is it readable as a film opening?
◦ To what extent is it readable as a [insert genre] film?
◦ Overall, how might the clarity of meaning in the video be improved?
• Overall, what are your ideas for how the above aspects of the video can be improved? Reshooting? Better editing? Sound? Rewriting parts of the script? What are your next concrete steps?
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